Saturday, February 8, 2014

Get Organized and Get Revised

Hello fellow writers. Today is a gloomy, grey, and rainy day in San Francisco. One of my kids is lying on the couch sick, so there will be no writing as I will inevitably be interrupted for food, blankets, Kleenex, juice, TV changes, and snuggles. 




Oh, and by the way, this photo I found on the web with the pencils in a neat row, clipboards, envelopes, and tags ready to go makes me so happy. I LOVE organizing! Yes, I have a little Monica in me. 


It's good to take a break from writing sometimes. Even if it's a forced break. But while I may not be able to write, I can organize. And boy, do I have a lot to tackle!



It's been just over one year since I had the idea for ANIMALIA. The book is done and has been revised once. I am in the middle of a second detailed revision, and once that is complete, I will be querying agents.





But as you can guess, years of work and revision pile up a year's worth of marked-up paper. I have chapters all over the place in my office. They have been read and edited by writer retreat participants, agents, editors, publishers, critique group writers, beta readers, and my amazing mentor.

None of them is in any kind of order.



So today, my writer friends, I am going to get organized.



  • First, I will bring all of the paper out into my living room and scatter them in some sort of piles that make some sort of sense


 
  • Next, I will separate them into revised and not revised, old chapters, chapters from Big Sur and Tahoe retreats, mentor chapters, and beta reader chapters
 
 
 
  • Then, I will put them in order
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
  • Last, I will find folders to put the different piles into and label them accordingly
 








After about 45 minutes, two cups of tea, one bar of chocolate, and multiple drinks, food, and blankets delivered to the sick child on the couch, I am halfway done with my organization.  I have to say I am quite proud of my piles of papers.



 I've decided to go the extra mile and remove all of the paper clips and use a stapler instead. That way, none of the pages ever gets lost again. I came to this conclusion after realizing that I have lost parts of 3 chapters due to paper clip malfunction.


 I have also lost parts of one chapter due to dog chewing. Yes, teacher, my dog ate my homework. I will make adjustments in my office to ensure this does not happen again. (maybe it was the chocolate smudge on the pages that got him chewing?)


After about 90 minutes, I have a well-organized novel in front of me. I'm so excited I could write a blog about it!!








Here I have the chapters I have already revised. They are in order and stored in this envelope, so none of the pages will get lost or eaten by my dog.




This is the last folder I created and the most recent readings I had done on the first 50 pages of ANIMALIA. 









Now that I am completely organized on this project, I feel I can get back to revising, tomorrow...when hopefully there are no sick children on the couch.









Use your gloomy daytime wisely!







Get organized and get revised.

Write~On,
Angie

 
 




 


Monday, February 3, 2014

Interview with Lewis Buzbee: Author, Teacher & Writing Coach

Wow, what can I say about Lewis. Well, he's awesome for one. And I mean awesome, like they used to use the word. He is the grand canyon to me….awesome! 

I met Lewis over a year ago at Big Sur at the Andrea Brown Writer's Retreat. I happened to sit next to him for one of the dinners. There were also 3 other ladies at the table. He looked at all of us and then said, "Do you know you are all from the San Francisco area?"

That started a friendship and a mentorship that has changed my writing for the better in every way possible. When my book does snag that agent, I will have Lewis Buzbee to thank tremendously….along with the other 3 ladies, Jennifer, Victoria and Deborah for all of their critique help.


Lewis is an awesome coach! Yes….AWSOME! And below are the questions I asked him.


You have lived in California all your life, but for those of us who don’t know, what is a Dust Bowl Okie?

My father and his family left Oklahoma during the Dust Bowl, among the first “Okies” to arrive in California.  For decades, Okie was a horrible slur; we now wear it with pride.  





If you didn’t become a writer, what would you have been?

Oh, a rock star, for sure.  Well, that was my hope, at least.  I’d been playing in bands and had set my sights on that, but then, in my sophomore year of high school, I got ambushed by literature. 



Describe your style of writing in 5 words:

Driven by rhythm and sound.



What time do you get up and what do you eat for breakfast?

We wake up at 6:30, to get my daughter ready for school.  Grape Nuts with fruit, and lots of coffee.



Why write? Why teach?

I write because I have to, because these stories live in my head, and if I don’t get them out, I’m a bear to live with.  I think of writing as a public service; I’m much nicer to be around when I’m writing.  

I teach because I love working with writers, helping them, when I do it correctly, to discover the stories they carry around all day.



What’s it like to be on the faculty of the MFA program at the University of San Francisco?

It’s great to teach writers who’ve made this huge commitment to their work and their lives.  Their seriousness forces me to amp up my own commitment.  

I used to teach at UC Extension, though, where anyone could take a class, and I miss that a bit, the student who just shows up with a wacky idea.



Where do you go to get a great cup of Joe/tea in the city?

My daily place is The Beanery, on the corner of Irving and 7th Avenue; they roast their own coffee, and it’s brilliant.   But I can frequently be found at Four Barrel on Valencia in the Mission, where, among the hipsters, I’m the old guy.



You recently started privately coaching writers. Why?

Oh, it’s not that recent.  As well as teaching in the classroom, I’ve worked one-on-one with writers for twenty years now.  I began because some of my classroom students asked me to work with them, and I found that during one-on-one, both myself and the writer can dive much deeper into the subject matter, from the use of a specific punctuation to much deeper issues—why we write, what we write about, etc.



How has coaching writers helped your writing?

It makes me a smarter writer; to describe something to someone, you have to know for yourself what it is.  It helps me to ask myself better questions.



Why do you think you are the best coach for the job?

I’m not sure I’m the best.  However, I do have a great respect for every writer I work with.  I’m not trying to make them write MY book, but truly want them to write the best version of the book THEY want to write.  I leave my ego at the door. 



If a writer wanted to hire you for private coaching, how would they go about doing that?

Go to my website, lewisbuzbee.com, and drop me a line.



Who are you reading right now?

I’m always reading everything, but I just finished, last night, J.K. Rowling’s The Casual Vacancy, and I have to tell you, it’s an impressive and completely pleasure-inducing novel, a brilliant mix of the comic and the serious.  I couldn’t put it down.  But today I’m in that sad place, in between books.  I can’t wait to pick up what’s next. 



How has living close to Golden Gate Park influenced your writing?

I’m decidedly a city person, so having this grand swath of green right here, it’s just enough of a relief—fresh air, enormous trees, hawks and herons and egrets. 






What do you think about self-publishing vs. traditional publishing?

Listen, I think self-publishing is great.  I agree with Don Delillo: writing is a democratic art; everyone has a book in them.  So, why not?  

But traditional publishing is still, in the main, where a writer will find his or her biggest audience.  And me, I write for readers, for that connection between one mind and another. 



Why should newbie writers go traditional?

Because traditional publishing creates better books.  If you’re lucky as a writer, you’ll get an editor who both loves your book and is willing to put pressure on it to make it even better.  Editors do so much more than correct typos.  

A good editor makes a manuscript into a book.  It’s almost impossible for the writer—or the writer’s friends—to be editors.  It’s takes a cold and diligent eye to do that.  We need editors.  Publishing is so much more than copy-save-print.



Who is your biggest cheerleader?

My wife, Julie, certainly.  Julie and I were writer pals for several years before we connected romantically.  She’s a very sharp reader, and, of course, she wants my books to thrive.  It’s great to have that support built into the house.



What are you working on right now?

I’m writing my first true YA—my other kids’ books have been MG.  It’s called Garbage Hill, about a one-day music festival of the same name, and it’s all sex, drugs, and rock and roll.  So much fun; I get to act my true age, which is about fifteen.



Who in your past influenced you to become the writer you are today?

Every one of my teachers, high school through grad school.  And I was fortunate, truly so, to meet the two Rays, Ray Bradbury and Ray Carver, when I was a young writer.  They both offered invaluable insights into the writing life, and into my own writing.  Both very generous human beings.


For every book you’ve written how many books have you read?

Well, let’s do some math.  I’ve read—I recently figured out—something like 5,000 books, that’s a whole bunch.  I’ve written 13, with two in progress, but only published 8 so far.  We’ll go with written.  5,000 divided by 15, then, that’s...333 or so books for each one written.  Yikes!



How can my blog readers help you to become an even bigger success?

It’s easy, buy my books.  If you like a writer—not just me, any writer—the most you can ever do is buy their books, full-price and brand-new and not from Amazon.  

Going to readings, reading blogs, blah, blah.  It’s books that count.  So, since you asked: buy my books, give them to everyone you know.  They make wonderful gifts.



What one word best describes you?

Enthusiastic




Any big news?

I’ve got a new adult book coming out in August from Graywolf, Blackboard: A Personal History of the Classroom.  It’s a memoir and history of the classroom, and in the end, a strident demand that, as a society, we start putting our money, real money, back into public education.


Thursday, January 23, 2014

BIG SUR: What I Learned Part 2: QUERY LETTERS

 The Big Sur Writer's Retreat with the Andrea Brown Literary Agency is one of my all-time favorite retreats. Not only have I learned a ton about writing first sentences, first chapters, and the first 50, but I've made some lifelong writer friends. 

I suggest that all of you reading this check it out for this year. There is a March and December retreat. Here is the link: | Upcoming workshops are Dec. 6-8, 2013 in Big Sur & March 7-9, 2014 in Seaside, CA – Click on Register page!





Laura Rennert is, of course, one of my favorite agents at Andrea Brown, not only because I interned for her but because she knows her stuff. She's signed amazing authors and helped launch newbie careers. Oh, what I wouldn't give to be the next one in that category!!!


At Big Sur, she talked to us about query letters and what should be included in them. Below are my notes on that conversation.


Laura: Query Letters / Reverse Engineer

3 components: you are unknown to us, so give a little context

1st Section

  • category & market
  • this book is in the same space as
  • compare to other projects

2nd Section
  • who, what, where & why should I care?
  • the character must come through in the query
  • context…world…where the story is unfolding
  • 1-2 sentences to convey the arc & stakes
  • why should I care? what makes this project special?

3rd Section
  • context about yourself
  • social media
  • authenticity
  • why could only you write this story?



So there you have it from the horse's mouth to your eyes and hopefully into your query letter. 



Some of you are in the same boat as me --- getting ready to query. I hope you understand that the query letter is your handshake. It should not be moist, or sweaty, not hairy or sticky, not too hard like a gorilla or too light like a butterfly - it should be just right. It should convey that you are a master of your craft, your story, and yourself. You are marketable and strong, but willing to show your sensitive underbelly in your writing. That you take this seriously, and you know it's a business, not just an art form. 



If you can do this, get your handshake down right, and you've got the best shot at getting that agent to read your first page.




Good Luck!
Write~on
Angie

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